You pay peanuts, you get … a punch in the goolies
Friday 25 March 2011, 3.05am HKT
Below is a real advertisement on Craigslist Hong Kong (if you can call stuff anywhere on Craigslist ‘real’). Just read it and you’ll see why.
My emphasis are red boldfaced. My notes in square brackets (you know, these things: [/]).
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English writers needed
Date: 2011-02-14, 10:54PM
We are looking for English writers  to write articles on music, beauty and fitness topics.
We are looking for writers who are looking for long term work. [1A]
Here are the basic requirements:
1. Min. of 1 year experience
2. Articles should be error free [1B]
3. Articles should pass copyscape 
4. Well researched articles 
5. Articles should be minimum 500 words 
$1.00 per article of 500 words [4A]
$2.00 per article of 1000 words
Should be able to start now.
The keyword phrase needs  to be in the article title,  first sentence  and used another 5-6 times throughout the article for a total keyword density of 1.5-2.5%. We pay via PayPal within 24 hours of completion of each article project of 25 articles, so the sooner you can  finish the articles the sooner you will receive payment.
When we hire a new writer  we pay them $11 at  completion of the first 10 article batch  to show that we pay. The articles need to  be informative to the reader  with 100% correct grammar,  punctuation and free from factual errors.
Also, the articles must be  100% unique; they will be reviewed through Copyscape and Plagiarism Detect for plagiarism. [16A] If an article you submit does not pass Copyscape, or has spelling and punctuation mistakes, you will not be paid for that article until it is corrected and resubmitted to us for approval. We will not be able to pay  if all requirements in this listing are not met [17A], so please don’t  apply if you can’t  meet these requirements.
You agree that upon sending us the articles  all rights to the articles transfer to us. This means you will not sell, reproduce or re-use  these articles in any way. Please be able to communicate at least one time per day via email or messenger . Application will only be considered with a sample article on a topic that we choose.
- Compensation [21A]: $1.00 per article of 500 words, $2.00 per article of 1000 words
- Telecommuting is ok. 
- Principals only. Recruiters, please don’t  contact this job poster.
- Please, no phone calls about this job!
- Please do not contact job poster about other services, products or commercial interests.
Original URL: http://hongkong.craigslist.hk/wri/2213674010.html
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‘If you pay peanuts, you get monkeys.’
That’s the old adage in business.
In this particular case, the advertiser is paying LESS THAN peanuts, so he (we assume it’s a he) is getting — castrated with a blunt instrument, without anaesthesia, at dawn, very slowly, by an inexpert hand.
I don’t know whether to laugh or cry, quite honestly.
Clearly, some local moron copied this advert from some genuine job advert somewhere, and altered bits here and there to shoehorn the thing into his/her ‘stunt.’ I know so. I’ve seen the real version of this advert before, many times, over many years and in several different countries, in a serious (even professional) setting.
But this is the first time I’ve actually seen the ludicrous payment rate of $1.
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Count the heads so they can roll, baby
Let’s do that thing called headcounting that lawyerly types like The Naked Listener is so enamoured to doing. (I remind readers/listeners that I used to be a professional editor before I switched to the less profit-challenged line of a printer.)
THE TEKNIKAL SHIZ
Skip this part if you’re a ‘native’ English speaker, i.e. grew up speaking it.
 Factual error/ambiguity: “English” — meaning what? Writers who are English from England? Writers who write in the English language? Only a Chinaman would write something like this.
[1A] Ungrammatical: ‘long-term‘ is hyphenated as a adjective, dumbo.
[1B] Ungrammatical: ‘error-free‘ is hyphenated.
 Factual error: “Copyscape” is capitalised: it is a service-mark/trademark.
 Ungrammatical: ‘well-researched‘ is hyphenated.
 Ungrammatical: either “… of minimum 500 words” or “of 500 words minimum.”
[4A] Factual ambiguity: indicate the currency. We assume the price is in U.S. dollars and not Hong Kong dollars (HK$1 = US$7.75). If the job poster intended Hong Kong dollars, then we have to assume he/she was asking for death threats to be made against him/her. At any rate, it works out to 0.2¢ (or one-fifth of a cent) a word. This is the definition of insanity.
 Ungrammatical: use either ‘has to be’ or ‘should be’ — don’t use ‘needs to be’ because that f*cking rude: you need to be a little more responsible if you want to work with writers who produce original articles for your stupid whatever.
 Punctuation style: replace comma with ‘and‘ because “article title” and “first sentence” form their own individual listing clause.
 Punctuation: insert comma because “and used…” is another clause.
 Style: the correct way is ‘1.5%-2.5%’ (extra % sign required).
 Ungrammatical: delete “can.”
 Punctuation: insert comma.
 Ungrammatical: replace “at” with ‘on.’
 Ungrammatical: “10 article” is an adjective and should be hyphenated (i.e. ‘10-article‘).
 Ungrammatical: replace “need to” with ‘should.’
 Argumentative/ambiguous assumption: it would be nice if you would actually spend five seconds to think things through with your copy and tell us what kind of reader you have in mind.
 Ungrammatical and incorrect punctuation: same reasoning as point  above: replace comma with ‘and.’
 Ungrammatical: replace “must be” with ‘should be’ (first choice) or ‘has to be’ (second choice).
[16A] Factual error: Yeah, right on about plagiarism. Like your own fukken advert threw up literally 42+ results on Cityscape itself. You lie, you DIE.
 Ungrammatical/stylistics: replace “will not be able to pay” with ‘will not pay‘ (first choice) or ‘cannot pay‘ (second choice) or ‘will be unable to pay’ (third choice). “Will not be able to pay” is not even f*cking English, dickhead!
[17A] Ungrammatical: replace “not met” with ‘unmet‘. Only a pretentious Chinaman would dare write “not met” in this way because that’s how Chinese phraseology operates. Job poster, you are causing other people to be racist at us.
 Stylistics and consistency: spell full-out “can’t” and “don’t” or use contractions throughout. Don’t waver between full expressions and contractions.
 Punctuation: insert comma.
 Punctuation: ‘reuse‘ is solid (i.e. unhyphenated).
 Factual ambiguity: a human messenger or did you mean Windows Live Messenger (i.e. MSN)?
[21A] Factual error: it’s fukken called ‘remuneration,’ you blithering idiot.
 Orthography: capitalise “ok” (i.e. OK).
- Grammatical errors: 14
- Factual errors: 6
- Punctuation errors: 5
- Style problems: 3
- Assumption problem: 1
- Orthography problem: 1
- Total problems/errors: 29
Assessment (a.k.a. ‘your days are numbered’)
DING! DING! DING!
WAKE UP! I need you to be focused!
This abortion of an advert is littered with grammatical and style mistakes. No self-respecting copywriter or editor or plain ole’ writer could physically make them. Not even while doing LSD or meth or some other hard narc shit while turning sick perv BDSM tricks in a dirty toilet with a trannie (i.e. a tarp/trap) and a strapon dominatrix. Not even once.
And heeeeere’s Johnny with his undefeated, stupendous left hook smack-whack at the jaw with the force of a thousand suns:
“One dollar. Head needs to be opened.”
(Johnny is a teenage neighbour of mine who barely speaks or reads English, but clearly much more efficient and succinct than The Naked Listener in editorial assessments.)
One, the whole tone is wrong. It’s a highly threatening tone. It’s not like you or I were already working as a staff employee for this ‘job
poseur poster’ because that would be barely acceptable/legal. Yo friggin’ dissin’ us, talking Five-O on us, brotha.
Two, don’t bleeding come on in a threatening tone disguised as stringent specifications. If you do, better make sure the remuneration you’re offering isn’t on the weird side of LSD-meth-cocaine-opium town. What you pay, is what you get, choadboy.
Three, you don’t deserve “100% unique” articles (not even for free) if make unfunny jokes about money. Dad used to say I could never really take a joke about money. I’m not moneyminded or a tight wad, but to me, a joke about money is roughly ±10% of the actual mark. This, yo-ho-ho, this is an incendiary letter (in Scottish legal parlance, whether a letter or otherwise) or dire provocation (in English law). In my parlance, this is an invitation to a Southern death threat (not to be confused with the really nice rock band of the same name).
Four, hey, you little piece of deformed shit, you can’t even do a simple advert on a portal like Craigslist. You can’t even do it without plagiarising several dozen of the same already-recycled advert, AND THEN make grammatical mistakes. Main reason: your mother’s a crack whore and your father’s a failed faggot who can’t do a goatse.
Ultimately, you’re dead meat, son
“I know what you’re thinking: ‘Did he fire six shots or only five?’ Well, to tell you the truth, in all this excitement I’ve kinda lost track myself. But being as this is a .44 Magnum, the most powerful handgun in the world, and would blow your head clean off, you’ve got to ask yourself one question: ‘Do I feel lucky?’ Well, do ya, punk?”
Trivia: This post contains 1,599 words. Time spent on writing was 1 hour. Time spent on formatting was 14 minutes. Time spent being totally flummoxed by the advert was pretty much 10 hours since first viewing. Do you think my post is worth more or less than $1?
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